Hmmm, thought (if I can sneak it out in my work breaks) I might put in a couple of possible (my suggestions only)
changes as I see them, I cant help tweaking so please ignore me if I am getting to be too much of a pain
hope you dont think I am trying to teach you to suck eggs, EEK
just wanted to help
"... the Gren are the only ones with
distinctive differences in abilities."
I guess it should read
"The Gren and the Ulvar are..."
I am at a loss as to this one, I am guessing you will know best as to where you want them in the Neb
(love the way you included and named the 'Boneswipe'
I think your rules for it are perfect
re their vision and such
"thus most Ulvar rarely keep their
heads still, constantly moving them from side to side order
to increase their perception of their environment"
I would change this to read "... to increase their spatial awarness" much better
I wonder if we need to add a mechanic to facilitate the fact that they are easily surprised (or do you reckon the almost constand head motion should negate this?)
ULCAR CASTE TRAINING BONUS
Yep, you narrowed this down perfectly Bill, thanks
Would add 'Prounounced "Oolvar" somewhere
the HAGA need fitted in here
"The inward looking nature of the Ulvar mindset has only
been exacerbated by their first contact with an alien race,
the disasterous meeting with the –---- that resulted in the
Ul var ---- war where the Ul var race was very nearly
needs dated yet
"their history as it pertains to the Nebuleon itself
only goes back a mere ---- years"
Guess I really should Stat up a ‘Knobbler’ sometime too, it could always break loose from the Zoo, end up (somehow) in a cargo hold and spread to the Neb proper, heh,heh you never can tell
and I guess ‘Phipreta’ and the ‘Khani’ burgers could always be an interesting 'treat'
but, I am getting away from myself here and a tad over excited with it all I think
darn, gotta get back to work